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Using
feudal and military diction, Will represents himself as suffering,
suppliant, and earthbound (though Christlike), while the beloved auditor—here,
perhaps, the dead son, Hamnet—is among the heavenly ranks
(4), idealized and eternal but also dead, forced into heaven
before his time. Except in the third-person aside (4-5), the poet seems
to address the friend in a humble tribute (2-3) likened to hymns
(1ff.). As a kind of crusading Christian knight, the friend is due homage
(1-3); is off to battle, forced by honor (4, 8, 13); and is
soon in heaven, where the region cloud is like dust obscuring
a phalanx (5). A strong offense and perhaps a military loss
(6) has occurred.
Other details
reinforce the military conceit: Sullen (1) has heraldic overtones;
region suggests a battle locale; masked implies
a visored knight (5); and pay (2), due (3), and
take that honor (8) imply serflike service. Qs so
(11) puns visually on foe; heavens gate
(1) suggests an ironic siege; and eternal numbers (10) puns
on heavenly host. Other puns include Lay on! (14),
a combative directive; th air-guns loud (5); Ares
[Mars] the Strong often sees loss (6); and ...I kill enemy
(14).
In
these hymns, Will cultivates musical puns such as
ranks (4, suggesting an organ—a sexual pun amplified
by equipage); a tunes gait (gaiety) (1);
march (4) as martial song; bear(s)
(6, 12); part (9); numbers (10); and lay
(14).
Ranks
(4) also denotes the lined-up textual rows, verses that finally
are Wills cross to bear (14) because structurally Q
has two overlaid wood (an antique pun on insane)
members, parallels to love and hate (see 12).
The poem
broaches witty sacrilege because Will finally seems Christlike
while the friend may parallel God the Father laying the cross—that
torturous rack—on his Son. Wit about the crossed (cf.
acrostic) elements of Sonnets and Runes occurs in Two
(i.e., sonnets and runes) march in ranks (4) and both forms
ache (14), suggesting sonnets and runes are both hard.
This cross (14) suggests this burden, this hybrid genre,
this acrostic game, this mix of love and hate (see 12). This
cross also puns Th S. series, a name
for the Q cycle.
Showing Wills
preoccupation with his dead son, Hamnet Shakespeare, is Qs string
himns at (1), a pun on Ham. S. and an anagram for
Hamnit S. that allows the play From sullen earth sings
Hamnet S., heavens gaiety (...god, guide) (1). The boy has
gone To march in ranks of better equipage—the
sexual pun stressing adult maleness.
In
a more straightforward way, the first lines embed the fatherly
lament, From sullen earth sings Hamn. S. at Heavens gate,
/ Which I new pay [bay] as if [assize] not paid [bayed] before.
Aimed, perhaps,
at Dr. John Hall, Susannas husband and Wills son-in-law after
June 1607, is the play Th heir [pun: air], John-cloud, hath
masked Ham from me now (5). The sense would be that John Hall, as
Wills son-and-heir, helps blot out the loss of the son, Hamnet.
More basically,
I believe that in Will’s own mind the Quarto project would
have served several purposes and fit several paradigms: In one primary
sense it is a kind of epithalamion group celebrating Halls marriage
to Susanna (and, especially in Set I, urging their procreation), with
the “marriage” of Sonnets and Runes an apt analogue for the
couplet; concurrently, I think, the project is a dual tribute to Wills
twins: The visible Sonnets are analogous to the living daughter Judith,
with the buried Runes emblematic of the dead Hamnet. Further, the torturous
overlay of Sonnets and Runes, like warp and woof in a complex tapestry,
was probably a self-effacing gesture of contrition, a self-imposed cross
to bear, a kind of mea culpa that an absent, artistic father could carry
out as partial expiation for his own separation from his family. Critics
unfriendly to such psycho-theorizing can easily ignore the suggestion.
Routine
witticisms about Anne, Judy (Judith), Sue (Susanna), T.T. (Wills
known printing agent Thomas Thorpe), and Southy (patron Henry Wriothesley,
Earl of Southampton) occur. Examples include these: ...eye Ju /
dy, here John see low, death masked Ham from me now (4-5) and wicked
aye, m Anne, death ought suffice wittily... (11). Qs
letterstring Su c hc i uill waris in
(opening 7), encodes,
e.g., Sue see (Susie) huss (Susie H. see), aye vile (evil), worries
John,
hussy will war aye, sin (vile whore
,
worry
scene, ...worry scion, ...worsen), and so on.
More general
wit includes the sexual pun feminine O is thine alone
(4).
Sample Puns
1)
Fair homme, fool, near this inches; a tune’s gaiety;
His air hum; Hamnet [cf. above]; Hymen’s; a tune; a twin; suck 8;
thief
2) Witch,
John, you pass—eye snot, pity (piety); W.H. itch, aye new (I knew),
passes not; itching, you piss; eye snot, pity Bess, whore
2-3) not
paid before t’ Hat., dues; red, hideous, m’ Annie nosed hiney
low (…knows it, anal one [wand])
3) deux,
dieu; dust; m’ Anne y’ now eye, Southy, kneel; eye City,
kneel; an “O” is wasting alone; awl wan; feminine “O”
is thine alone; my nine
3-4) a
tome aye rich
4) Tommy;
Two [i.e.,sonnets and runes] march in ranks; Tome, high-reaching rune,
see; kiss of Betty; see keys
4-5)
bitter keep, a jetty region; eke [also] you eye page, the regions lauded
him (hymn); a quip: Eye Judy, her age I own—CL [i.e., 150]; egg
5) their
guns loud; John’s lauded hymn; see love, death, masked Ham. S.,
rheumy now (in “O”); Th’ heir, John, saluteth my ass;
cloudeth; lo, you death amaze, kid; hymn of Roman “O”
6) To
Ham’t, Hat. bears thee strong; love; oven’s loaf
6-7) off
in Sicily’s huge civil war is enemy (I sin); Ares
7) civil
war is in Milan; His huge silver is in my loan; Anne Hat.; my love innate
7-8)
dieting lass thou take
8) a
cat had honor from thy name; “V” (you) in lass—th’
“O”—take that, hone ’er, sir, emit high neigh
8-9) sorrow
meeting aye m’ Anne
9) tough
awl (Hall); art o’ faulty glory
9-10) Anne—by,
apart—awful; offal, a part of Hall, thick, low, really uterine,
all numb arse, twat (taut, or stout)
10) Eat urn,
awl, numb arse too; Anne [et] urn awling you may be; Eternal
numbers taught Livy
10-11) lo,
in jetty twitch, Timon died
11) Wicked,
eye m’ Anne; foe; Eve
11-12) tail,
dusty dick, I’ve too, be hairy, low; Shakespeare [st] dick,
heavy to bear, love’s wrong
12) Tup ’er,
love Sue, wrong then hate; Hat’s known injury
12-13) in
jury W.H. erred; know a Nein jury, W., Harry, thou art forced
to break a tussled Ruth
13) W., Harry,
t’ Howard forces T.T. (titty); at wassail died Ruth
14) Anne—both
forms ache; both forms ache [sonnets, runes are hard]; lay song;
both, sore mistake, lay on me; zeros see; see row FF [i.e., loud]; C-Row,
ass, see; th’ rheumy f--k lay on me this cross; meet high cirrus
(Sirius); my fickle eye; a kee1 eye, John, meaty is series
Acrostic Wit
The
downward acrostic codeline—FW TTTTS VAEV T WA[V?]—
encodes likely wit about T.T. (i.e., Thomas Thorpe, Will’s
printing agent and the T.T. of Q’s frontmatter) linked with puerile
jokes about womens breasts: e.g., Oft witty T.T. swayed (...sued)
we, If wet (...witty), T.T.s waved away, Few
titties waved we (...waved away), Feud, it is waved away (...it
is woe to weigh), “Of wet titty so ate we,” “Oft
witty T.T. swayed we,” “Oaf, witty T.T., Southy, weigh,”
“Feuded Southy. Why?” and the like. (U, V, and W tend to interchange
in Wills alphabetic code.)
The
upward reverse—[V?]AWT VE A V S TTTTWF—may
be decoded to read, e.g., “Vowed [Owed, Ode] we ‘Aves’
t’ T.T. tough,” “Vow tough, stiff,” “Votive
Eve-stuff,” “Votive Eve’s tough,” “Vaunt
we owe, St. T.T. t’ wife,” and “Oat waves titties. Whiff.”
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