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(as usual) of bawdy innuendo, this poem also houses some dramatic
ambiguities that we’re used to in the last two sets in Q, where
the visible Sonnets also vary the topic of an obscure triangular relationship
involving the poet, his male friend, and a perverse (and in this instance
demented) female. Q’s Dark Lady, I propose, is on one level a figure
for the runic Q project itself, the poet’s Crazy Ms. (or Mysteries).
Possibly
the poem sketches out a courtly scenario in which this female
interacts with the poet and his auditor/friend/muse: A demented (3) and
aging (12) “mistress” persona wearing “art’s false
borrowed face” (1) steps up to meet a man who “engrosses”
both her or her “next self,” an alter-ego (7). Like others
before her (11) she yields, begging the auditor whom she approaches to
deceive her by avowing love (14). The dual-natured courtesan stands for
Q—foul in the Runes but artfully masked by the Sonnets. The friend’s
cupped palm (2), open for a kiss or tribute, transmogrifies into a crowded
“bay” (11) that Will, the poet, wants to “fill full”
(10). At least in part, “Will’s will” means
the verse ms. itself (1-2), a testament to dispense the poet’s
intentions (9).
Repetitions
and motifs add technical unity and show careful crafting: Occurring
multiple times are the terms cheeks, face, will(s), love, past, no(t),
art/heart, and better/best. A string of body-part nouns
includes face, hand, cheeks, heart, and eye. Incidental
rhymes include hide / ride / aside. The endwords grown
and en-growest are echoic—as are face / east / best;
hand / had; and kind / thine. “Economic”
diction includes borrowed, tender, engrossed, covetous, and
forbear (as “not call in a debt”). A connection exists
between sunset (implied 6) and “days are past the best” (12).
And the opening and closing lines are intertwined remarks about duplicity
(1, 14).
Will’s
artfully paired writings (see 1), the Sonnets and Runes he’s preparing
for the auditor’s “hand” (2), are products of both “past[e]
thought” and irrationality (3). The term “gray cheeks
of th’ East” (6) may suggest old, arcane jokes (see cheeks
in OED); usual plays on “knot” as “riddle” occur
(5, 14). “Forbear to glance…aside” (13) exhorts us toward
persistence. Vagueness about “her” (4, 12) and such “Anne”
puns as that in the “Will line” (10) make the poem seem to
voice the complaint of one restless, “anchored” husband: e.g.,
“I fill it full with Will S.; Anne dim you’ll own [i.e., acknowledge
as having her name faintly inscribed here, with “dim” suggesting
“not bright”].
The
typeforms of line 1 help illustrate the playful nature of the
poet’s symbol system, with kinds of tedious wit lost in modern printing:
Since “f” and “long ‘s’” look alike
in Q, faulse puns on souls, fowls, and fools. Pun clusters in
1 include “fearing / paring / searing,” “soul / fowl
/ fool,” “arts / artist / hards / hard ass,” “false
/ salts / souls / fowls / fools / sauce / Saul see,” and “face
/ sauce / faze.” Lines 1-2 pun, e.g., “Searing the soul with
arts, all see B, our row [...error], defaced....” “B-row”
means line 2.
Both the
downward and the upward acrostic codelines, conventionalized parts of
the Q game, seem to comment tediously on the apparent alteration of the
rune’s initial “F” (in line 1) to make it look like
a “P.” This alteration is the kind of minimal detail that
Will’s printing agent and collaborator, Thomas Thorpe, surely must
have executed at the poet’s direction. (Thorpe, a smalltime entrepreneur,
is known to be the “T.T.” who signed Q’s cryptic and
much-debated dedication page.)
Numerous
such typographical oddities sprinkle the 1609 Quarto pages.
Other
puns in the letterstring codelines of the (horizontal) textual
lines include these:
“defy
Cato, kiss fetid end, err, John[ = in], warty oaf...” (1-2);
“to end rune, ward off the windy Pastor S. anointed—I in din,
‘O’ fon [i.e., round or rune silly], heard...” (2-3);
“in
word of the wine, deepest reason hunt, Ed. [= T. Thorpe?], and know fon
[i.e., silly] error...” (2-3);
“Row F is seen here”; “rows easy I inhearse” (4);
“G-row
[i.e., line 7], nebbed here, becomes the gray cheeks of th’ East,
and my next is else...” (5-7);
“Howard
resting grows fat”; “thou hard erased John gruff (...gross)”
(7);
“to you, sane, dusky Indian owed one sou” (8-9);
“eye
silly tussle with Will S.--and a mule wan” (10);
“Biancha reddened a bare awl, my inner ‘I’ dull [idol,
ideal], though she knows my days are past the best...” (11);
“be anchored in Thebe [sic], eye Ural minaret alt [= high]”
(11-12);
“Midas aye ribs T.T.” (12); and
“Dead Harry, hard, forbear to glance thine ‘I’ aside,
th’ ‘O’ huge not to love, yet love to ‘tail’
Ms.- ‘O’...” (12-13).
See
below for fuller explorations of puns in the letterstring lines.
Puns toward the end of the text are about Wyatt,
the early sonneteer, and Tottel’s miscellany (1557), the
collection in which the sonnets of Wyatt and Surrey are preserved: e.g.,
“Dirty forbear to glen, city nigh—aye, city, town—ought
to laud low [i.e., praise quietly] Tottel Ms., O!” (13-14). Too,
line 14 puns on Wyatt (code: yet). One version of the pun is,
“Town ought to love Wyatt, love Tottel ms., O.”
Sample Puns
1) Pairing [F altered to suggest P];
fool; salts [tears] borrowed of ass; you lewd hard-ass; soil; the soul
withered
1-2) with arts, Saul Sybarite faced; Pair in jetty salute, hard
asses all see, burrowed asses to kiss; Saul February (zebra) defaced;
saber odd face took; eye Cato kiss fetid end; leafy (Livy) be our row
de facto; face to quay, eye fated end, eye rune-word o Southy;
enduring war, dusty Anne
2-3)
August hit, in Darien war, dusty hand pays terrors; to end rune, ward
off the windy pastor; in word of the wine, deepest reason hunted
3)
you into dandy nose, honored
3-4) a début know, f--k her O; Past reason
hunted, Anne know, fon, red, Butt know, f--k rosy ass, see I
enter cheeks; Pastor has anointed Anne Dean of Honored Butt (no f--k!);
I saw nun dead eying din of honored butt; Ed. Anne-nose honored, butt,
nose you see; past-reason suggests arcane lore of earlier times,
previously asserted truths or motives in the Runes; narrowed butt know,
f--kerosis see
4)
in O, f--k her; Row F is seen here; rows easy aye; rows
easy I inhearse
4-5) Roughest sinner checks this ass; know of huger office: Seine
hearse he kissed
5) Thief, eye Satan; face Hath., naughty power; note the port,
O; naughty, poor Tommy, kill ogre wan; grown
5-6)
one better becomes the Greek, he kisses thief
6) Bitter be come, Southy; Bitter become Southy, Grey, see; beck
o mist, hickory see; T.T.-err becomes thick rage, he kisses thief
5-7)
G-row [i.e., line 7], nebbed here, becomes the gray cheeks of
th East, and my next is else
6-7) the greasy kiss of the East Endymion excels; our age kisses
the ass tandem, why?
7) Endymion ecstasyll fit Howard; art, here halved, engrossed;
Howard rafting grows fat; thou hard erased John gruff (gross)
7-8)
Gruff Ed., fart, Howard covets end
8)
owe Sandusky in din; O, use Andes-key
8-9)
to you, sane, dusky Indian owed one sou; Anne dieskin,
denoting sieve, ouches assd, wide mule
9)
two hid Emile (a meal) in th hiney; a sea to hide Milan;
in Chichester, autumn youll end aye
9-10)
item: Willy Nate hiney eye, fill it full; I fed (Ive hit)
wide mule in the anus; mule in the anise; Not once, five [times], O, you
see heavy-set, wide mule
; well; in th hiney, eisell eye
10) eye
silly tussle with Will S. and mule wan; centime(s) youll owe (yellow)
10-11) Anne,
damn (dim) yellow Nubian, see; eye lone bean; my willow nib Anne shortened;
I, silly, tease you, lewd Will S., Anne dim, youll wan be, Anne
see, whored
where all men ride; Milan be anchored in the bay; will
sandy Milan be Annes hoard?
11) Biancha
reddened a bare awl (burial); eye Ural minaret; Paeon (Paying), see whore-din,
the bare awl-men are eyed; be Anne cored in the barrel men ride
11-12)
eye delta huge, f--king Os; all men ride the hose; Be anchored in
the bay, W., Harry, awl man, ride all; riddle, th O huge
12)
how fecund, O, is Midas; Jesse knows Midas aye; Midas aye rips T.T.; eye
ribs, titty; daze; paste; beast; sheikh, know (no) Semites are past Thebes;
In O, Semite Is are paste; my desire passed; yes, a
repast
12-13)
Hebes titty aye reared, sore, bare; Hebe, steadier, heard sorbet;
hard sorbet redo, glands t hiney; Dead Harry, hard, forbear to glance
thine I aside, th O huge not to love, yet
love to tail me so
13) Dirty
(hard) is our burdock lane, see; bear-talk lay in city nigh; city, Nice,
eyed; Anne seed (seat) heinous eye
13-14)
eye neophyte (sedate) Huguenots to Laud love; see th Annie, acid
Huguenot, tell off idle Ovid
14)
in Ottoll Ovid low; knot; two; loo; ye et tail; Th O-knot
[not] to love, youd love total ms., O; yet low to tell my foe; ye
Anne [et] loveTotal Miss O; laud ye, too low, Tottel Ms.
[suggesting Tottel’s Miscellany]
Acrostic Wit
The
downward acrostic codeline—FT P BT B A FN I BAD T—as
well as its upward reverse seems to comment on the apparent alteration
of the runes initial F to make it look like P.
Possible readings of the doward code include these samples: Fit
P [type]bit be aye [eye-] fon [silly], I bade it,
abate
it, Fit P, bit B, often I
[is a] bad T, Fit P-bit be aye F
nibbed [i.e.,altered with a pen], Fit pate (pied) t
aid as Annie bait [B=8, F=S], and “Fit ‘P’ be
tidy, finite aid.”
The
upward (reverse) code—T D AB INF AB TBPT P—suggests,
e.g., Ted [i.e., Scatter] a [type]bin fey, B typed P,
“Today eye Eden fated (faded), pee to pee [B = phonic 8 throughout],”
Today [Ted = Scatter] A/B! Enough A/B! Tipped [Typed] P, Today
eye 8 enough, eye 8, t 8 pee tip [B=8], Today eye Eden
fated (faded), pee to pee, Today eye Eden fey, 8 [inches]
to 8, pee to pee. Fair Pair suggests Sonnets/Runes.
Minimal
phallic humor about a tipped pee seems to connect f--king
and pissing. An I that makes bad tea (or a bad
T) also has phallic roots.
Because
the opening letterstring code suggests “Today be...,”
one may hear “Today be 1 Nov. ’88....” The three “8s”
(notated as Bs) may encode the date 8-8-08. Capital P suggests the forms
of runic thorn (= th) and wen (= W).
All these features add to the cornucopic possibilities inherent in the
code(s).
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