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Rune
141 comprises in sequence the 14 first-lines in the last 14 sonnets
in the Quarto cycle, i.e., Sonnets 141-154. These numbers make up Set
XI, the last of eleven sets in the buried scheme and also the second set
in succession dealing with the poet’s “Perverse Mistress,”
his Dark Lady.
Though it’s
generally true, I propose, that the Dark Lady is a metaphoric equivalent
to the poet’s “mss.” or “Mysteries,” Runes
141 and its sequel 142 don’t highlight this particular conceit.
Overall, a dominant topic in Set XI is Will’s own self-imposed predicament—that
of a writer whose every line is an elaborate double entendre struggling
to encode disparate meanings concurrently. This topic recurs throughout
Q.
As
a runic mea culpa, Rune 141 establishes a figurative dialectic.
On the one hand is the “virtuous” friend (2), controlled by
supernatural Power (10) and conscience (11) that both help him resist
the speaker’s advances (2). A diametric figure is the libidinous,
licentious, love-sick, “lying” (12) poet; Eros dominates his
attraction to the friend, and, as speaker, he is like a “lying”
Cupid (14). The “two lips” made by love (5) to become the
focal center in the speaker’s life (5) are a complex conceit suggesting
multiple ideas: e.g., “labia”; the friend’s lips (or
other orifices), objects of affection that bring both grief and pleasure
(4); and the poet’s own lips, which may stand for his bifurcated
rhetoric (in Sonnets/Runes), for his “poor soul” (6), and
also for the two outside figures he talks about, his friend/auditor and
mistress/text.
Will’s
insistence that he is “forsworn” (i.e., perjured,
12) and, like Cupid, is “lying” (14) is slippery. “I
do not love thee with mine eyes” (1) means partly that,
in his physical absence from the friend, his lips express his
affection instead. He also “lies” because he speaks irrational
doubletalk. He is a “lover asleep” because (in the Runes,
at least) he has no voice—but, paradoxically, still “lies.”
He is childish (“too young to know what conscience is”) because
he babbles, as if feverish (7). (Sonnets editor Stephen Booth in his Yale
UP edition notes the conventional pun “cunt-science” in conscience.)
The “brand”—vaguely, a flaming arrow—that Cupid
“lays by” (13) is the poet’s pen, with phallic innuendo.
The
puns “two loaves I halve” (4) and “wise runes
two catch two loves” (4-5) add texture to Will’s
figurative bifurcation. Q’s spelling runnes (suggesting
“runes”) and the OED definition of “catch” clarify
this play: As a musical term, a catch was “a round in which one
singer catches at the words of another, producing ludicrous effects. 160l.”
The “‘O’ cruel” (pun 9) is also the “ringlike,
injurious round/rune,” and each textual “O” (8, 9, 10)
puns further on “round”; the routine pun “knot”
(1, 9, 11 [as “know what”]) suggests a puzzle. The “in-faith”
that the poet “does not love” (1) is partly the coterie allegiance
that must have caused him feverish difficulty as a writer.
Puns on “low”
and “lowing” occur, suggesting bad singing; in fact, 11 of
14 lines harbor forms of loue (Q’s spelling). Puns on “pour”
(6, 10 [twice]) suggest ink, and Q’s spelling “CVpid...”
suggests the play “See vapid lay [i.e., insipid song]” (13).
“Religious”
diction includes “In faith,” “sin,” “virtue,”
“comfort and despair,” “soul,” “sinful earth,”
“power,” and “Love-God.” The detail “brand”
(13) and others vaguely identify Cupid with Satan, while the friend’s
Power (10) seems a Godlike foil and source of “virtue” (2,
10). Paradoxically, a Cupid who “lays by his brand” (13) after
his creative act (see 5) suggests God’s rest after Creation, while
his “sleep” is vaguely like that of Adam. Diction about money,
buying, and ownership includes “powerful mite” (10), galvanizing
“careful housewife” (3) into a glancing Biblical allusion
to the Widow’s Mite.
Puns
about fishes and animals, and jokes about eating, include “poor
fowl” (6), “fin” (2), and “loaves” (2, 4)—adumbrating
Christ’s Feeding of the Multitude and putting in a new light the
question, “O, from what power halved thou these powerful, mighty
(empty) / loaves two…?” (10-11). The pun in “owne hand”
on “Onan” (5)—who “spilled his seed upon the ground”—gives
“sinful earth” (6) a quite specific sense. Bawdry about small
penises accumulates in “powerful mite” (10), “the little
love-god-lying-wand’s asleep” (14), and the overlaid pun “a
flea-pee” repeated in the exact rhymes of the couplet.
A
motif of eyes ties together the opening and close, just as “lying”
connects diction about eyes and lips.
Pointing
toward Will’s own wife (and away from the Bible) are such
puns such as “Anne—tidy or weird—you Hate-away ass see,
our Eisell (Evil) Housewife…” (2-3, with Q’s hate,
I.Oe using an altered “L”) and the phrase “what
eyes hath” (8)—a syllabic anagram (which rearranges to generate
“Hath eye[s] wha[t]”) in which the “extra” ft
encodes the recurring name-cipher for “Shakespeare.”
Such plays on “Anne Hathaway” seem almost
overtly keyed to “careful housewife” in 3. One way to read
the rune, in fact, is as an address to Anne in which Will tries to apologize
for breaking a marriage vow he made at too young an age and to rationalize
the dying of love’s flame.
Indeed
the text is a tour de force of puerile anti-Anne wit. For example,
lines 1-2 (in mine eyes, / ...) pun, “...m’ Annie
S. loves my sin....” As Booth has noted in one instance elsewhere
in Q, the word and forms a possible pun on “Anne.”
Similarly, the word what (e.g., here in 8, 10, 11) puns on Anne
Hat. (with w = IN = Anne). Thus the letterstring in line 8 admits
the reading “Home, Anne Hat. aye is Hath-I-way [= Q hath loue]...,”
with what eyes hath loue... punning “Anne Hat-e-Y is Hath-I-o-we...,”
with concurrent scatology and body-function humor, and with my head punning
on “maid.” CAnst (Q 9) puns “See
Anne Shakespeare the house rule...,” with the printed ft
digraph being the Shakespeare family name cipher that I have deduced,
a ‘long s’ seeming to ‘hold’ a dagger-
or spearlike t by the handle and ‘shake’ it. Line
10 opens with the pun “Offer our homme Anne Hat. poor,
base T., Thos. Th. is powerful midget,” concurrently denigrating
the poet’s wife and his printing agent, Thomas Thorpe. Q’s
what powre puns on “Anne Hath-o-were...” (with p
= thorn, archaic th). Q’s and dispaire (4)
puns, e.g., “Anne, disappear,” with the run-on pun “Anne
die, ‘Speared...” Q’s hand did make, / POore soule
the center of my sinfull earth... (5-6) puns, “Anne died, make
[i.e., mate] poor, foul, thick Anne, terror awesome, wife Anne, foolhardy
H. [itch]....” And so on, almost infinitely in the crafty
Q codestrings.
An
ingenious pun on “Wriothesley” (Q ... re,THoseli...
[4-5]) and another inverted one (ruell, fay [9], cf. “Rillsey,”
“Risley”) point the poem’s wit toward Southampton, while
acrostic wit about TT (see below) broadens its contemporary audience to
include the poet’s printer-agent.
Like all eleven of the first-line groupings in the separate sets, Rune
141 features in its paste-up form the oversized capital letters as printed
in Q, a text that (I deduce) was overseen during the printing stage by
Will’s (previously identified) printing agent Thomas Thorpe, the
man who “signed” the title page and infamously cryptic dedication
of the book. My own deduction is that the printed details of Q represent,
in jot-and-tittle detail, the poet’s carefully authorized intentions.
One
example of Thorpe’s likely involvement in arranging Q’s
printed forms oppears in the lefthand acrostic (discussed below), where
an initial oversized L is apparently altered to I. in
line 3.
Another
example of manipulated typography occurs in 13f., where the italicized
Vpid after the initial C underscores such pun as, e.g., “See
vapid [OED 1656] lady buy his ‘brand’ and
sell a sleepy tail....” Another strained pun here is “See
vpid [i.e., as printed elements] laid bias [i.e., oblique (OED
1530ff.)], beruned, and [see] sales [i.e., of the poet’s book] leap.”
This pun underscores the fact that the italicized letters lie “on
the bias.” Concurrently, the pun “lead bias”
may be a printing term. Since “vapid” means “damp or
steamy” [OED 1690], the pun “sea, vapid” may also be
intended, with “...and sails leap” an amplifying detail in
the line.
The
altered “L” (initial in 3) appears to be printed
from exactly the same type-bit used initially in Rune 1.3; as “I.,”this
detail triggers possibilities: e.g., “I light [lit] P.M.
occult.” The “light ‘I’” is filed down and
shows an aberrational white space. Printing agent Thomas Thorpe would
have been Will’s collaborator here, helping to effect minuscule
wit.
Sample Puns
1)
John sayeth, Eye dough-knot lewd, The Weight, m Annie
S.; In faith Id O, knot lewd, hew (hue); John,
Satan ought love (
ought love to hew [hue]); John, Satan owed love
to you, Satan ought laud you; Laud hued my anus; Ovidy, witty
m Aeneas
1-2) wit
minus love is my sin; knot lewd you eyed, harmonious, low vice-hymn; Item:
Annies loo (loose); with my knees low, aye (high) is my fin handy,
hid, eary; my Annie-ass loves my fin; eye
Slavs, missing and dead; aye sallow is Mycenaean dead-head
2) Is
Mycenae in debt?
ended? I is my sin, Anne died,
headier word you hate; Love is missing, Anne did [maiden]head/ear
virtue hate; Low is my sigh anent theatre, word you hate; Louis
missing, indebted; eye seamy Finn, and headier virtue hate
2-3)
you Attilas ass aye wrestle; you Atlas, Asser solace; Hathaway [hate,
I.oe a, with L altered to I.] is a careful
housewife, our Annie S.; Low is Miss Annie, Anne, diet headier were to
Hate. loss, a sicker fool (aye sick, her soul); Louis eyes my Seine, handy
to hate, eerie, weird-hued Louis see arise aloof, wiser, you in Nice
3) Lo,
asses [imitating 2, initially] are full of wise runes to catch (catch
round, rune); housewifeour ownass, toes itch too
3-4)
few eye Pharaoh in nest o cat-shit; wise runes togad chattel;
Eunice took 8 chattels, eye halves, see em; is togad cat Wallace?
4) Wooly-ass
(Wallace), eye half-ass seam fart and disappear; Tall, O (T hallow),
you Shivas see; eye Wyckham fart and disappear; Too low, is Jesus home
farting?
4-5) handy,
spy (spay) I Wriothesley piss, the tail-office, Onan did I damn; fore-tanned
didies parade hose (prate whose) lapsed; paired O-syllabus, thought lucent
died; t Anne Dis-parrot Hosea lisped
4-7) Two
loaves [suggesting hips, etc.] I halve, Os comfort and despair;
come, farty Anne, deaf parrot whose lips (tee!) Hath-I-way sounding did
make pour, foul, the center of my sinful earth, my loo-ey sauce, a sewer
5) Onan
did aye; aye Dulcinea ended m ache; Thou Phillip stayed Louis
Onan-deed
5-6) eye
dim (I damn) a (item eye) caper foul; my keeper is old (
sold his
aunt;
his interest, missing fuller theme); Th offal I piss,
that loo-sound Anne did make pour
; make mate
6)
Poor, foul the scene
6-7) my
sinful earth-milieu is a Savior; tear off my ms.-in-full here,
Tommy, low vices eye, if you are longing still; Himalayas, I save (sauce)
you eerlong
7) My
Louis ass I see eerlong; asses aye see were long-inch
Shakespeare, allow me! [the exclamation mark combines phallic and pudendal/anal
elements]
7-8) Mellow,
Isaiahs ass you eerlong inch, fiddle O mute (muddy);
May Louis ass a virile (feral) engine (honking) give Ptolemy; eye
loamy, white-assed Hat.; long-inch, ass-tallow mute I shat; aver, lo,
in jing of till, O, me (owe me), Hat. aye shat, tail of puta
in my head (in mead, in mid-sea)
8-9) low
puta named sane (Seine) fit doggerel; hallow poot, John, medicine
of T.T., ocher wells eye; lo, puta in Medician fit to you occur;
Homme! what has Hat-I-way put in medicine of T.T. (titty)?
9) See
Anne Shakespeare, thick or vile (thick her vial); See Annes doggerel
fail; See Anne Shakespeare, Thos., rules aye, a lofty knot; ogre of hell,
assail Ovid; See Anne S., T.T., hog her Yules ale; Canst thou, O,
see, Risley [Rill-sey], I love thee not? Canst thou, O cruel, fail, Ovid
henad [platonic monad, 1678 from Gr]?
9-10) Ovid-hint
owes Rome weighty power;
Hen. ought (He, Anne, aught) Os
roam; see rule, fail, Ovidhe no tough Rome; in fit doggerel salute
(salad), hee! notice Rome; say, ill Ovid, hint, O, from what power hast
thou this powerful mite; tough Row M (Rome), W.H., had power. Hast thou?
This powerful M (hymn) I jet?
10) O, fair
O, mew a typo erased; pay Aristotle [i = l] his poor sou limit (his poor,
sole mite); Over homme, W.H. Id pour; halved, th
odes pour, solemn I jet; Os row mute pours T.T. out
10-11) midget
Louis toy hound owe you; revel may get lusty; midget lusty, hung,
took naughty cunts, sciences anal; my Judy low is too young to know what
cunt-science is
11) [see the
beginnings of 2, 3] Loosed to you in jet, oaken [suggesting wooden,
crazy] O, W.H. eyed cunt-sciences; in jet, Okinawa
tis unseen
11-12) ass,
see incising, low inch
12) I
in, loving that oaken O, W. Shakespeare jams arse worn; the
token O stems our fewhorny, capital 8; In love, John
Judy (jetty) took in O
12-13) loving
th heath, O, you know stems or [pur]sue horny cow; Noe (Noah) stems
whores worn capital; neck up, I delayed bias
13) See, vapid
lady buys barren Dan; delayed bias be randon; eight buy his barren, dandy
ass; See, you peed, lad, biased be rune; I debase bare Anne
13-14) randon
devils leap t hell; petaled, teal, lo, figged Lincoln see asleep;
bare and dandy sailors (fellows) leapt; eying devil, I flee petaled tail
of God [cf. Dantes Paradiso]; petaled tail of Godll
win John
14) lying
John, see a flea pee; Th l Italy got l.
Why, John? (John see, asleep; John, seize [sees] l-heap);
Go dallying, John, seas leap; Tale idle lugged lying John; join Cecil,
pee; in Sicily (Cecily), pee
Acrostic Wit
The acrostic
code in first-line texts is doubled because of Q’ s typographical
emphasis. Each implicit code here allows manipulation and possible “deciphering.”
(Note that the ladder arrangement of the doubled acrostic codeline allows
four “corners” as starting points, and also allows two directions,
up and down, for each leg of the ladder. The permutations that start from
the lefthand corners are down/up and up/down
(the hairpin variants), and down/down and up/up; each
one of these four codelines has an implicit reverse, which will start
from one of the righthand corners. These facts explain how each
first-line text in the 11 sets generates eight acrostic codeline permutations.
Additionally, the most overt codeline (i.e., the emphatic lefthand letterstring)
can be read separately in its up and down variants,
just as it can be in each of the other 13 runes in any given set.
To what
extent Will tinkered with these to make them meaningful is anybody’s
guess. One keeps fathoming the limits of his “great mind.”
To some extent language will play its own intrinsic games, regardless
of an author’s conscious intentions.
One reading of the codeline that is visually most insistent—i.e.,
ILL TT PM O COLICT—is “Ill Thos. Thorpe [i.e., Will’s
known printing agent] p.m. ‘O’ [i.e., a nightly round or rune]
collect.” (The scenario shows “T.T.” coming by Will’s
place late to collect the poet’s latest work, and gagging on what
he gets.) The acrostic elements CO LICT pun on “company licensed”—and
on “colic,” echoing ILL.
The full
down/down hairpin code—ILL TT PM O COLIC T
NOO WHOYM A HON V H—may be aimed at printing agent Thomas Thorpe.
The codeline suggests, e.g., “Ill T.T., p.m. ‘O’ [round,
rune] collect—gnome [i.e., aphorism] I owe new,” and “Ill
T.T., p.m. O-colic [i.e., nighttime bowel distress, with ‘O’
suggesting ‘anus’] t’ know—Whooom! A honey!”
Other readings include “Ill type, my occult, no (know) homme
(...home) I honor” and “…an O-womb I honor.”
The down/up
hairpin code—ILL TT PM O COLIC THV NOH A MY OHWOON—suggests,
e.g., “Ill T.T., p.m. O-colic, the ‘V’-gnome [groin
aphorism] ye own [i.e.,have, acknowledge],” and “…th’
vino eye, my own!” (Does Will visit his “sick” friend
Thorpe with a bottle of wine?) The code also suggests “Ill T.T.
p.m.-O [a nighttime rune] collect, the vein [of wit], O, aye my own.”
The up/up
codeline and the up/down (hairpin) codeline offer similar kinds
of gamy potentialities:
The up/up
code—T C IL O COMPT T L LI HV N O HAM YOH WOON—suggests,
e.g., Tickle O, cunt; lying, owe a Mayan, To see ill
O, count to 11. O, Ham, you won!, T see high/low, come,
T.T., Livy-gnome you own, To silo come, pet lion o Ham
you wound, and T seal (sell, kill) O, count to 11, O,
ha (O, aye) my O won! Zero eye my O wan! (Eleven sets seal
the runes into place; Ham[net], the dead son, wins, perhaps,
as one muse of a nearly completed project. Livys breadth makes sense
of high/low.) Other possibilities are these: Tis
ill O, come pee, T.T., liven O
and
live gnome
you, H.W. [suggesting both Southampton (Henry Wriothesley) and John Hall
(as H., IN.)], own.
The up/down
hairpin code—T C IL O COM PT T L LI NOO WHOYM A
HON V H—might be interpreted to read, e.g., To sell O,
count to 101 anew. Why money?
W.H. owe you money,
T cielo, come, Pit: hells annoy M.A. who knew,
Hells I know. Why my honey? and To seal O, Count
Lyly know, whom I honor. (A play on LL and MA as academic degrees
may be at work here, as the poet one-ups his university-educated betters.)
Other suggestions in the codeline are Compt and T.T.,
LL
. Thus this reading: T see ill O [T cielo],
Compt LL
, John, Homme, I own you,
Ahoy!,
Away!
O, why?”
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