Notes on Set III: My Outcast State
The
lines of the two opening sonnets here—among the better
known in Q—color all the runes in the set with melancholy contemplation;
the affirmations of their couplets, by contrast, lend a relatively upbeat
tone to Runes 41 and 42, as if to make those two a sort of “couplet
close” to the runic string inherent on the leaf. Sonnet 33, with
its butchered-looking confessional line mentioning “Heaven’s
Sun [Son]” (Sonnet 33.14), provides a rare “Christian”
detail—however “serious”—in a welter of Q verses
sometimes verging on sacrilege. The acrostic NOT (Sonnets 35, 39, 42)
catches the eye on the leaf, as does the familiar TT (41-42) and (less
overtly) the long-line endpun “dusty f--ker” in the upper
right (Sonnet 32.2).
The nascent
figure of the Perverse Mistress, anticipated in Rune 26.13, finds various
manifestations in Set III—e.g., as “Thy Amiss” (Rune
35), “Lascivious Grace” (Rune 41), and “Sweet Flattery”
(Rune 42). Rune 32.9-10 here uses the concept of Rival Poet, first mentioned
in Rune 19. These conceits—for the poet’s “perverse
mysteries [cf. mss.]” and for himself in the “antagonistic”
role of rune-writer—gain momentum as the cycle builds in later sets.
On one level, at least, the “crime” of the auditor, portrayed
as a “sweet thief” (Rune 42.7) etc., is his complicity in
the runegame.
As
it emerges in the runes, the tenuous topical unity in Set III
comes from a preoccupation with the bifurcated writing project itself,
its paradoxes and ironies, the impossibility of its publication. The usual
text in the set is a lament or complaint. If Set I urges “increase”
and Set II deals with the poet’s role in securing the muse fame,
Set III stresses the poet’s alienation from the very figure he “flatters”
and—until the last covert text or so—seems to be saying, “What
have I gotten myself into here?”
The editorial
title I’ve imposed on Set III denotes not only Will’s personal
isolation—as romantically suffering artist, necessarily isolated
by the act of writing from the object(s) of his intense attention—but
also these unprinted “discards,” the Runes, that we are not
recompositing, as it were, from the “outcast” fragments of
Q, as printed. Though OED shows “state” emerging late (1874)
as a technical engraving term, the meaning “condition (of a ms.)”
is already inherent in the ME meaning: “One of several forms or
conditions in which an object…is found to exist.”
Emerging
Stratford-focused materials invite new readings of the Sonnets
in the set, but the irreducible mysteries of biography seem to remain
locked inside the poet’s crafty brain.
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